Well done, Springfield! Powerful and thought-provoking ideas! An editing challenge could be to see if the lines sound different if you swap them around. How would the poem feel if the last line was '...end the world with one clap'?
You're all poets, and you can do anything! Great work!
Well done, Oakwood! So many imaginative ideas!
An editing challenge could be to spot any verbs which are used more than once, and find others to replace them.
You're all poets, and you can do anything! Great work!
Well done, Wolston! There were many more brilliant ideas whizzing around all day, too! An editing challenge could be to think about words you could use instead of 'have', and whether any lines might sound even better in a different place in the poem.
You're all poets, and you can do anything! Great work!